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[精品课件]广东省中山市高中英语 Unit 5 Travelling abroad(Writing)课件 新人教版选修7_图文

Module 7 , unit 5 Traveling abroad

Basic writing

Communication ways

Personal writing letter to a penfriend

writing a letter :
1. an ancient ritual 2. practiced only by mom and dad 3. many rewards to sitting down and
expressing yourself on paper 4. showing effort, respect and care

So what should we take into consideration?

Structure of a letter
Up right: information of the writer Up left: address of the receiver Greeting: Dear… Main body of the letter
Ending (bottom right ):Yours …,XXX



My address

– Address of Mr. Tan

– Dear Mr. Tan,

I am writing to tell you our opinions about changing our dormitories.

we feel really thankful to you for your sincere consideration for us. But after thinking and exchanging our opinions we do believe that it would do us good to keep on living where we are in senior 3. Our reasons are as follow…



We do appreciate what you have done for us and would be

grateful if you take our opinions into consideration.



Yours truly,



xxx

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The main body of the letter

1)opening :
I’m writing to tell you that … I have the honor to address you that … Thank you for your last letter of May, 20th …
3)ending:
Please write back soon

2)Main part of the letter

? In order to meet the demand of the Entrance Examination to College, what should we do? What can we do?

?How to make our sentences more beautiful?

After reading the following sentences, discuss with your partner to decide which one is better .
Can you state your reason ?

Which one is powerful
It is quiet in our school and there are a lot of trees in it.
____________ Group A Our school is quiet with a lot of trees in it.

The newspaper is widely known and deeply loved by people.
____________ Group B It is a well-known newspaper, which is very popular with students and English learners.

Group C

60% of the students think that fees should not be charged, and 40% of the students think that fees should be charged.
_______________ Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the _____ ___ students are against the idea of entrance fee. On the _____ other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged.

Group

D

I opened the door. I went the window. I opened the

into the room. I walked to window. I looked out. There

are many old women doing morning exercises. I

watched them for some time.

A_f_t_e_r _I _o_p_e_n_e_d__th_e__door, I went into the room. It was d_a_r_k_i_n_s_id__e_t_h_e_r_o_o_m, so I w_a_lk_e_d toward the window and opened it. I saw some old women who were doing morning exercises and w_a_t_c_hed them for
some time.

Af_te_r__o_p_e_n_in__g_t_he door, I went into the room. It w__a_s_d_a_r_k_i_n_s_i_d_e_t_h_e room, s_o__I_opened a window to let in some light. I saw many old
women doing morning exercises. I stood at the
window,_w_a_t_c_h_in__g_t_h_e_m__f_o_r some time.

What do you think are the most important elements in BASIC WRITING?

How to distinguish GOODDIES & BADDIES

Proper use of words Complexity of sentence Accuracy of grammar
CCoionhemfroeprnmcleeatbeteintowenesegnsisoveenf tnences

?examples

我决不嫁给你。
I will never marry you. Never will I marry you. I will marry anybody but you. You are the last man I would marry. If you were the last man in the world, I would remain single. If you were the last man in the world, I would go to temple(I prefer to be a monk).

凤凰卫视著名节目主持人梁文道一到纪 中,就受了纪中师生的热烈欢迎。

As soon as LWD arrived at ZS, he was warmly welcomed by ….
On arriving at the airport , LWD…
LWD was warmly welcomed directly/ the moment he arrived at ZS.
No sooner had LWD arrived at ZS than he was …
Hardly had LWD arrived at ZS when he was …

It is not an easy job to finish a composition using five sentences, so it is of great importance to use complex structures.

Rewrite the sentences
方法一 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁生动

蟑螂cockroach在他 宿舍的不时出没 给他的生活造成 了极大的干扰。

? Cockroach appears in his dormitory from time to time and it makes great trouble to his life.

?Cockroach appears in his dormitory from time to time, totally disturbing his life.

方法二. 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力
Complete the sentences
1. He didn’t realize the importance of learning English until he was receiving an interview from a foreign company P&G.
1. Not until he was receiving an interview… did he realized the importance of learning English. 2. It was not until he was receiving an… that he realized the importance of learning English.

2. To my surprise, my
girlfriend on the Internet is
actually a forty-year-old man.
使用名词性从句
What surprises me is that my girlfriend on the Internet is actually a forty-year-old man.

方法三.使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采
1.As a result I failed my exam. My exam turned out to be a failure.
2. I didn’t get high scores in the exams of this term. I didn’t do well in my academic performance this semester.

? 你的美国笔友James对北京的胡同很感兴趣,希望你能写封信给他介绍一下北 京胡同的情况。请根据以下中文提纲,编写一篇关于北京胡同(Hutong)的 英语介绍:

[写作内容]

? 目的:大部分建于元明清三代,便于统治者管理、监视人们的行

?

为。

? 破坏:因为政治和经济原因,在清朝末期,损毁严重。新中国成

?

立后得到修缮。

? 结构:胡同将人们住的房子连接起来。

? 现状:越来越多的外国人游览胡同。

? [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

? [评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯

联想词汇
? 统治者 ? 朝代 ? 监视 ? 新中国 ? 修缮

emperor
Dynasty Keep an eye on the People’s Republic of China
Improve/repair

由词连句
? 便于统治者管理、监视人们的行为 ? That made it easy for the emperors ____________________ ? and ______________________________
? 因为政治和经济原因 ? Due to ___________________________

? 你的美国笔友James对北京的胡同很感兴趣,希望你能写封信给他介绍一下北 京胡同的情况。请根据以下中文提纲,编写一篇关于北京胡同(Hutong)的 英语介绍:

[写作内容]

? 目的:大部分建于元明清三代,便于统治者管理、监视人们的行

?

为。

? 破坏:因为政治和经济原因,在清朝末期,损毁严重。新中国成

?

立后得到修缮。

? 结构:胡同将人们住的房子生活连接起来。

? 现状:越来越多的外国人游览胡同,以此了解北京。

? [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

? [评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯

Introduction of Beijing Hutongs

? Dear James,

?

I am glad to receive your letter, in which you ask me some

information of Beijing Hutongs, now I would like to share what I know

with you.

?

The majority of Beijing’s Hutongs, which made it easy for

the emperors to rule the people and keep an eye on their

movements, were built during the Yuan, Ming and Qing

Dynasties. At the end of the Qing Dynasty, many Hutongs

were seriously destroyed due to some political and economical

reasons. After the People’s Republic of China was founded, the

situation was greatly improved.

Introduction of Beijing Hutongs

? The Hutongs connect not only the houses where people live but also people’s lives. Nowadays, more and more foreigners come to visit the Hutongs, hoping to experience the traditional Beijing.

?

I would like to receive you as my

honorable guest here in Beijing, please let me

know if it is possible. Please write back soon.

?

Yours sincerely,

?

antonychen

Address your envelope